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제목 | 20150722 | 등록일 | 2015-07-23 |
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내용 | 1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea 2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period |
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담당강사 | Kyla | 등록일 | 2015-07-23 |
첨삭 내용 | 1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea - The typhoon comes in every month of July and August .
2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period
- Many accident happened during this month of July and August due of typhoon. There are some disaster happened such as floods and landslides. |