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제목 20150722 등록일 2015-07-23
내용 1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea

2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period
담당강사 Kyla 등록일 2015-07-23
첨삭 내용

1. The typoon has come every july and augist in korea

- The typhoon comes in  every month of July and August .

 

2. Many accident such as floods and landslide has caused in this period

 

- Many accident happened during this month of July and August due of typhoon. There are some disaster happened such as floods and landslides.

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