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제목 i waited for for your call in 21:50 time 등록일 2015-09-09
내용 I waited for your call.
but my phode didnt ring in 21:50.
Aftr while, I got your message that the calls kept dropping..

I will call center tomorrow in order to check the reason.
see you.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2015-09-09
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I waited for your call. but my phoNe didnt ring in at 21:50. AftEr A while, I got your message that the calls kept dropping.. I will call THE center tomorrow in order to check the reason. see SEE you.

That's correct Leesoo ... your phone would not connect at all, and kept dropping each attempted call.

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