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제목 | Please check my sentences gramatically (12.10) | 등록일 | 2015-12-14 |
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내용 | My company went through reorganization yesterday. There are new departments, but some departments disappeared because of reorganization. After toasting, I put down my cup on the table. I don't like to have a seat next to heavy drinkers. They prefer drinking soju to beer. If someone is good at making mixture of beer and soju, he or she receives praise from seniors. Most of my friends understand if I can't drink a lot. I've been much better than yesterday. Because I took a medicine and slept enough on my bed with hot mat. Hot mat got warm my body. Most important thing to feel better is to make our body warm. He was not a direct teacher to me. Even he didn't have any lessons for my class. I can't remember exactly what I made a mistake to him. Hitting someone can't be excuse anytime, anywhere. I bursted out crying with my resentment. I can't still undertand what he did to me. After that, I try to be kind to someone who makes a mistake to me. |
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담당강사 | Kendra1 | 등록일 | 2015-12-15 |
첨삭 내용 | My company got reorganized yesterday. There are new departments but some departments disappeared because of shuffle. After toasting, I placed down my cup on the table. I don't like to sit next to drunk people. They preferred drinking soju than beer. If someone is good at making a mixture of beer and soju, he or she gets praised from their seniors. Most of my friends understand that I can't drink a lot. I've been much better than yesterday because I took some medicine and slept enough on my bed with a hot mat. The hot mat kept my body warm. The most important thing to make me feel better is to keep my body warm. My HIgh School teacher was not a good teacher to me because he didn't have any lessons for the class. I can't remember exactly what mistake I did to him. Hitting someone is unexcuseable in a manner. I bursted out crying with my resentment. I can't still undertand why he did it to me. After that, I still tried to be kind to those who made a mistake towards me. |