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| 제목 | Resume | 등록일 | 2015-12-31 |
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| 내용 | OBJECTIVE GOAL To work for an Internet Based firm in a IT developer. Ideal position would provide exposure to various business planning process model to develop successful IT solution project in different market segments. I am looking to trade a creative mind and valuable business planning capabilities ACCOMPLISHMENTS Developed a business planning process model for Samsung. Various experience by contracting process skill for clients |
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| 담당강사 | Abby | 등록일 | 2016-01-04 |
| 첨삭 내용 | OBJECTIVE GOAL: To work for an Internet Based firm as an IT developer. Ideal position would provide exposure to various business planning process model; develop successful IT solution project in different market segments. I am looking to trade a creative mind and valuable business planning capabilities ACCOMPLISHMENTS Developed a business planning process model for Samsung. Various experience by contracting process skill for clients ____________________________ I corrected it already! Hope this will help! |
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