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| 제목 | Can you tell me about the company you work for? What kind of business is it? | 등록일 | 2016-01-07 |
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| 내용 | I'd like to briefly introduce my company. I work for Samsung data systems which is the biggest IT Service company in Korea. My company was established in 1985 and has been growing steadily since then. Our company has two main business areas. One is Service line and the other one is Solution line. In order to meet requirements and the business environment of clients, our company provides a variety of segmented IT services including business consulting, system integration, package solution, IT outsourcing, IT education and IT infrastructure. This year our company have two CEOs. One CEO is responsible of the whole company except for the solution line. another CEO is responsilbe for the solution line. My company is wiling to expand solution business like CELLO. CELLO is the solution for Optimizing Transporting routes and reducing Logistics expense. I hope my company to be ranked top 10 in the world and I’m so proud to be working for the best IT Service company. |
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| 담당강사 | Blair1 | 등록일 | 2016-01-07 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I'd like to briefly introduce my company.
I work for Samsung Data Systems, which is the largest IT service company in Korea.
My company was established in 1985 and it has been growing steadily since then.
Our company has two main business areas: service line and solution line.
In order to meet the requirements and the business environment of clients, our company provides a variety of segmented IT services including business consulting, system integration, package solution, IT outsourcing, IT education, and IT infrastructure.
We have two CEOs for this year.
One CEO is in-charge for the whole company except for the solution line. The other CEO is in-charge of the solution line.
My company is willing to expand the solution business like CELLO.
CELLO is the solution for optimizing transport routes and for reducing logistics expense.
I hope my company gets included in the top 10 companies in the world. It is an honor to be working for the best IT service company. |
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