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제목 | 16.01.07. Raise Pet | 등록일 | 2016-01-07 |
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내용 | Let me tell you about My Pet. Right now, I am raising some guppys. There are around 30 guppys in my small fish bowl. 3 years ago, My daughter brougt a guppy from her kindergarten. I thought a guppy was seems to be so lonely. So I went the fish market which is aquarium, and I bought a guppy in additional. Nowdays, these guppys are to be 30. Guppy didn't have hair and didn't come up allergy. So my wife agreed to raise them. Guppy is gorgeous and don't make noisy and don't come up allergy as well as to raise easy. I don't feel tired when I wash a fish bowl. Because they are a part of my family. |
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담당강사 | Sheryl | 등록일 | 2016-01-07 |
첨삭 내용 | Let me tell you about my pet. Right now, I am raising some guppies. There are around 30 guppies in my small fish bowl. Three years ago, my daughter brought a guppy from her kindergarten. I thought the guppy seemed so lonely. So I went to the fish market and bought an aquarium, and I bought a guppy in additional, too. Nowadays, we already have 30 guppies. A guppy doesn't have hair and doesn't give allergy. So my wife agreed to raise them. A guppy is gorgeous and doesn't make noise and doesn't give allergy and also raising them is easy. I don't feel tired when I wash the fish bowl because guppies are a part of my family. |