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제목 | Let me tell you about benefits of jogging. | 등록일 | 2016-01-11 |
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내용 | I like to go for a jog at my favorite park named hyowon park which is near my place. There are a lot of benefits of jogging. First, Jogging is the easiest exercise. So many people can do it. Second, Jogging don't need anything. Just you need comfortable pair of running shoes. And then you can enjoy jogging anywhere and anytime. Finally, I think jogging is the best way to lose weight without money. You can lose significant amount of body fat by jogging for a few minutes everyday. Also I can relieve my stress with jogging. Since I started jogging, I've lost weight and to be healthy better. I'd recomend you should begin to go for a jog. |
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담당강사 | Sheryl | 등록일 | 2016-01-11 |
첨삭 내용 | I like going for a jog at my favorite park named Hyowon Park near my place. There are a lot of benefits of jogging. First, jogging is the easiest exercise. So many people can do it. Second, jogging doesn't need anything. You just need comfortable pair of running shoes. And then you can enjoy jogging anywhere and anytime. Finally, I think jogging is the best way to lose weight without spending money. You can lose significant amount of body fat by jogging for few minutes everyday. Also, I can relieve my stress through jogging. Since I started jogging, I've lost weight and become healthier. I'd recommend you to begin to go for a jog. |