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| 제목 | The fun of using online flea market in Korea 4/4 | 등록일 | 2016-02-23 |
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| 내용 | Secondly, offer buyers various options as many as possible for their convenience. For example, I send my used items to anywhere by parcel or meet buyers face to face to deliver them near the POSCO Center, subway Sunreung or Samsung station depending on what buyers want. Furthermore, I let buyers to pay for not only cash but also gift card and any coupon which is even exchange of cash. They sure are good conditions for buyers to get used goods easily, aren’t they? | ||
| 담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2016-02-25 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Secondly, offer buyers various options as many as possible for their convenience. For example, I send my used items to anywhere by parcel or meet buyers face to face to deliver them near the POSCO Center, subway Sunreung or Samsung station depending on what buyers want. Furthermore, I let buyers to pay for not only cash but also gift card and any coupon which is even exchange of cash. They sure are good conditions for buyers to get used goods easily, aren’t they?
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Best regards, Vanessa |
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