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제목 Chatting on the phone. 등록일 2016-02-29
내용 I usually make a phone call with my best friend James. We used to chat on the phone for hours and hours before we got married each others. We talked about movies, works and all sorts of things. He was professional about movies. I got some information about movies. What were good movies? who starred in the moves? What were main story of movies? We used to enjoy talking about it. Also he was chef of vietnamene cuisine. We talked about ways of cooking vietnamene foods. It was interested in. And He leaded me into vietnamene foods. He gave me great pleasure too. So I real like to eat it nowadays. After I moved in Suwon 11 years, we often didn't make a phone call. I should give him a ring tonight.
담당강사 Sheryl 등록일 2016-02-29
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I usually make a phone call with my best friend James. We used to chat on the phone for hours and hours before we got married with our wives. We talked about movies, works and all sort of things. He was professional about movies. I got some information about movies. What good movies did you see? Who starred in the movies? What were the main stories of movies? We used to enjoy talking about them. Also, he was a chef of a Vietnamese cuisine. We talked about ways of cooking Vietnamese food. It was very interesting. And he lead me into Vietnamese food. He gave me great pleasure, too. So I really like to eat it nowadays. After I moved in Suwon 11 years, we rarely make a phone call. I should give him a ring tonight.

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