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제목 | Appointment 2 | 등록일 | 2016-03-16 |
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내용 | As you might know, I am working as system enginner. I have a lot of colleges also those are my clients. So I make many appointment while I work in my office every weekdays. Acually last Thursday I made an appointment with my colleges. We met to discuss for our new system. Thay told to me their asking. It was terrible for me. The works were pretty a lot. So I persuaded to reduce the works. I said that if I were you, I'd first do important works. I'd later do less important job. We were talking about it for a long time. At last I got the persuasion from them. I was really proud myself. Also they had satisfied. After all, right now I expect the project work out. We made an appointment to see again next thursday. Therefore we leaved conference room with happy each other. | ||
담당강사 | Sheryl | 등록일 | 2016-03-16 |
첨삭 내용 | As you might know, I am working as a system engineer. I have a lot of colleagues, also those are my clients. So I make a lot of appointments while I work in my office every weekdays. Actually last Thursday, I made an appointment with my colleagues. We met to discuss our new system. They asked me some questions. It was terrible for me. The works were pretty a lot. So I persuaded to reduce the works. I said that if I were them, I'd first do important works. I'd later do less important job. We talked about it for a long time. At last, I got the persuasion from them. I was really proud of myself. Also, they were satisfied. After all, I expect the project work out. We made an appointment to meet again next Thursday. We left the conference room with satisfaction with each other. |