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제목 | OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_Neighborhood) | 등록일 | 2016-03-17 |
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내용 | Question : Let’s talk about some of the memorable events that have occurred where you live. Tell me about some of the things that went on while you have lived there. I have been living 10 years in the Jamsil. The Jamsil is very big city in Korea, so there are the various events that held every year such as Cheery blossom festival in spring, maple party in fall, big concert in park and son on Most of all, my memorable events was cherry blossom festival in the last year. The event hold in lake 석촌, the main event is walking around the lake surrounded by Cherry blossom. It takes an hour to get to goal and during the walking we can see beautiful views and fresh airs. After that day, I have a big fan of Cherry blossom festival and I look forward it the next year. So I decided that whenever I have free time, I always participate in Cheery blossom festival with my family |
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담당강사 | Rebecca2 | 등록일 | 2016-03-21 |
첨삭 내용 | Question : Let’s talk about some of the memorable events that have occurred where you live.
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