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제목 | Busy day | 등록일 | 2016-03-22 |
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내용 | These days I'm quite busy for my work and for preparing for the algorithm test. I feel sorry for myself because I have not had enough time with my lovely family, my wife and daughter because of the work. I'm doing my best that I can on my work but things are not going well. Moreover my supervisor always criticizes my output and way that I handle works. It was such a gloomy Monday. | ||
담당강사 | Morgan2 | 등록일 | 2016-03-22 |
첨삭 내용 | These days I'm quite busy with my work and with preparing for the algorithm test. I feel sorry for myself because I have not had enough time with my lovely family, my wife and daughter, because of Great job, Rickie! I made a few small changes (and bolded them so you could see what they were). You did a wonderful job making the corrections we discussed in class. |