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제목 | Hi teacher | 등록일 | 2016-03-27 |
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내용 | I'm sorry I can't take a class on monday. because I have special education at that time. See you on wednesday. bye bye~ |
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담당강사 | Ara1 | 등록일 | 2016-03-29 |
첨삭 내용 | I'm sorry I can't take a class on monday. because I have special education at that time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm sorry I can't take the class on Monday because I have a special training to attend to at that time. ~ ( the - article usage/ Monday -capitalization/ a - article usage/ training -better word/ to attend to -additional word for better sentence/ Do not seperate them with the conjunction 'because'. You can make it into 1 sentence.) See you on Wednesday. Bye bye! ~ ( Wednesday- capitalization/ Bye - capitalization/ ! - exclamation point) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NOTE: Red - Better word/expression Blue - Additional word Green - Punctuaton/ Capitalization ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hi there, Flash! Thank you for sending me a message. I appreciate you for informing me about your absence. By the way, in composition correction, all the messages you send will be corrected. You can send me a message in the message box next time :) Thank you again! Teacher Ara :3 |