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제목 help 등록일 2016-04-01
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Before I catch a flick, I always talk with my kid what we see the movie.
My son’s opinion is important to see the movies what kind of movies to decide.
So I always talk with him.
To select the movie, we check out trailers and reviews for newly-released films.
Sometimes I book a ticket online, other times we go to a movie and I buy tickets at on site ticket box.
If we have time before movie begins, we always buy big size popcorn and beverage at the concession stand.
My kid likes to see the movie by eating treats but I don’t eat anything to concerate the movie.
After the movie ends, we often do a shopping.
On my way home, we have a conversation about the plot and give our thoughts.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-04-04
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Great job, Rose. Please review the edit text below:

Before I catch a flick, I always talk with my kid about what movie we should see.
My son’s opinion is important when deciding what to watch, so I always talk with him.
To select the movie, we check out trailers and reviews for newly-released films.
Sometimes I book a ticket online. Other times we go to a theater, and I buy tickets at the ticket box.
If we have time before movie begins, we always buy the big size popcorn and beverages at the concession stand.
My kid likes to eat snacks while watching the movie. I don’t eat anything, because I want to concerate on the movie.
After the movie ends, we often go shopping.
On my way home, we have a conversation about the plot and give our thoughts.

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