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제목 I was so happy with the class. 등록일 2016-04-02
내용 Hi, Shawnkeela. For one thing, I was confused and excited by the fact that I would have a level test.
In fact I have a mixed feeling about my English.
I want to use fluent English like natives, but it is not easy to do.
I have put my heart into my English for as long as I can rember, but it didn't work so well.
I believe that steady does it.
As you know, it feels great to communicate with foreingers, but it is almost impossibe to talk with people whoes natieve language is Engilsh in Korea.
Actually I had attended a 10 minutes phone class for 1 year, but it was too short.
So I signed up for a 15 minute phone class.

All in all I am so happy to meet you in the class.
Thank you.
담당강사 Shawnkeela2 등록일 2016-04-04
첨삭 내용

Hi, Shawnkeela. For one thing, I was confused and excited by the fact that I would have a level test.
In fact I have a mixed feeling about my English.
I want to use fluent English like natives, but it is not easy to do.
I have put my heart into my English for as long as I can rember, but it didn't work so well.
I believe that steady does it.
As you know, it feels great to communicate with foreingers, but it is almost impossibe to talk with people whoes natieve language is Engilsh in Korea.
Actually I had attended a 10 minutes phone class for 1 year, but it was too short.
So I signed up for a 15 minute phone class.

All in all I am so happy to meet you in the class.
Thank you.

 

Hello Tom,

What a wonderful message I totally apprciate this :) . I'm so glad you are excited about the class and that you have a longer class time to satisfy your needs. Reading your message to me was both rewarding and pleasing. Your sentencing structure is wonderfdul there are no grammar errors and I'd say you're far better with your English skills than you think. I know what it means to strive for a personal best so that is what we will do. We will make sure you become more skilled and comfortable in the areas you want to work on. Again, I am so pleased about your excitment for the class and I too am very excited to help.

As far as the level test there was no recent information listed in your student memo and sometimes when you don't take a class for a while the old information gets erased or when a certain amount of time passes the teachers have to reelavuate to see if things have improved so that may have been one of the reasons as to why you had to take another level test if that was not your very first one. Talk with you soon!

Your welcome,

Teacher Shawnkeela  

 

Note: There were a few spelling errors Whoes - WHOSE and rember- REMEMBER  as well as natieve- NATIVE 

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