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제목 My favorit movie 등록일 2016-04-04
내용 Hi Celine.

Today topic is Movie.
My favorit jenre of movie is science fictioin. I like to watch movies which produced from Marvel studios. Especially Iron man and avengers series are my favorit movies. I always watch all of movies when new one is opened. Robert downey started in Iron man is my loved actor. If I have some chance to me him I really want to get a signature of him.
I can imagine the science development of future throgh this jenre of movie. So I like to watch the SF movies.
New version of Captin america will be opened soon. I really wish that the open day of it as soon as possible. I will watch it with my old son.

Thank you.
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2016-04-04
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Hi Celine.
 

CORRECTIONS:^^

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Today topic is Movie.

>> Today's topic is Movie.


My favorit jenre of movie is science fictioin.

>> My favorite genre of movie is science fiction.

 

I like to watch movies which produced from Marvel studios.

>> Correct Sentence.^^

 

Especially Iron man and avengers series are my favorit movies.

>> Especially Iron man and avengers series are my favorite movies.

 

I always watch all of movies when new one is opened.

>> I always watch all of the movies when the new one is open.

 

Robert downey started in Iron man is my loved actor.

>> Robert Downey who starred on Iron Man is my loved actor.

 

If I have some chance to me him I really want to get a signature of him.

>> If I have some chance to meet him I really want to get a signature from him.


I can imagine the science development of future throgh this jenre of movie.

>> I can imagine the Science development of future through this genre of movie.

 

So I like to watch the SF movies.

>> Correct Sentence.^^


New version of Captin america will be opened soon.

>> The version of Captain America will be opened soon.

 

I really wish that the open day of it as soon as possible.

>> I really wish to open that day as soon as possible.

 

I will watch it with my old son.

>> Correct Sentence.^^

Thank you.

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>> Hello Herbert, thank you for sharing me about your favorite movie. I also like watching Science Fiction movies as well as Korean movies and TV series. Take care!^^

-T. Celine^^

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