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제목 | help | 등록일 | 2016-04-05 |
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내용 | At that time I got married 22 years ago my husband’s family had 11 ritual ceremonies for their ancestors including(Lunar new year and Harvest moon holiday). The items of ritual food wewe various and the pressing of cook was complicate. I was very embarressed because I was not interested in cooking and I didn’t know what to begin. But aunts came our home and prepared the ritual food. After ancestral rites, my housand and I had to clean up till late night. Our family thought that holding memorial services several times cost much money and consumed a lot of time and labor. So we had considerated memorial services’reducing for a long time and concluded that we had them three times a year effectively. But today, eldes brothers’wife of my husband go to the church, she doesn’t want to hold a memorial ceremony but can’t help but do that we prepare ritual food simple and holding thw memorial deremony is not harder than the past |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-04-06 |
첨삭 내용 | Great job, Rose! The edited text is below :) When I got married 22 years ago, my husband’s family had 11 ritual ceremonies for their ancestors including(Lunar new year and Harvest moon holiday). |