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제목 help 등록일 2016-04-06
내용 I always said that I am not a good at cooking.
Esoecially, holiday food is very hard to cook.
The kinds of food are various and cooking takes long time.
So I usually serve my oldest brother in-law’s wife.
I wash ingredients to cook vegetable pancakes.
I like them very much because they are savory and nutrious.
Although I don’t cook them well, I’d like to tell you how to make them.
Coat the vegetable with dough(mix the flour and water) and fry until golden on all sides. It's good tasty.
The Vegetables like spinach, bean sprout, bracken, white radish and so on are boiled and washed and then seasoned with seasame oil.
The house smells of savory.
We also cook grilled beef and chicken.
After cooking, I am tired but I am happy that Iprepare ritual feast with my whole heart.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-04-07
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Excellent job, Rose. Especially the last sentence. Very touching :))

I always said that I am not good at cooking.
Holiday food is especially hard to cook.
The kinds of foods are various, and cooking takes long time, so I usually serve my oldest brother in-law’s wife.
I wash ingredients to cook vegetable pancakes.
I like them very much, because they are savory and nutritious.
Although I don’t cook them well, I’d like to tell you how to make them.
Coat the vegetable with dough(mix the flour and water) and fry until golden on all sides. It tastes good.
The vegetables like spinach, bean sprout, bracken, white radish and so on are boiled and washed, then seasoned with seasame oil.
The house smells savory.
We also cook grilled beef and chicken.
After cooking, I am tired, but I am happy that I prepared a  ritual feast with my whole heart.

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