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제목 CPR Class 등록일 2016-04-06
내용 I attended the class, CPR this afternoon.
Have you ever heard about it?
It was the most impressive class I ever have had in my life.
A professional showed us how to do CPR.
Vidio clips were shown us for one and half hours
,and then the teacher gave me an oppertunity to perform the real practice with test device.
Finally I get a skill.
Now I can make people almost dead alive.
It was really a wonderful experience.
담당강사 Shawnkeela2 등록일 2016-04-06
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I attended a CPR class this afternoon.Have you heard of it? It was the most impressive class I have had in my life.A professional showed us how to do CPR.Vidio clips were shown for one and half hours,and then the teacher gave me an opprotunity to perform and practice with a test dummy.Finally, I learned the skill.Now, I can save people almost dead alive.It was really a wonderful experience.

 

Hello Tom, I'm so glad you had a great experience in your CPR class, and yes I took a CPR class once before and became certified, however that certification has since expired so I'll have to renew it again. Thank you for sharing your expericence with me. Talk with you soon :) 

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