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제목 ubiquitous 등록일 2016-04-08
내용 With the progress of technologies, especially information technologies, everything - human being, devices, sensors, computers, etc. - will be connected through the internet.
That is, we can communicate at any time, at everywhere, with everything.
I think, it’s ubiquitous computing.
담당강사 Amanda2 등록일 2016-04-12
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Great job with the word of the day Tommy! You used it perfectly! I corrected one or two minor things, but for the most part, your sentence structure was almost perfect! Keep up the hard work! See you next class! 

-Amanda

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Corrected sentences listed below:

With the progress of technology, especially information technologies, everything (human beings, devices, sensors, computers, etc.)  will be connected through the internet.
That is, we can communicate at any time, everywhere, with everything.
I think it’s ubiquitous computing.

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