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제목 | help, please | 등록일 | 2016-04-11 |
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내용 | A memorable event that was associated with weather usually happen in winter. In winter, a lot of snow fell down and roads are slick. Two years ago in winter happened accident. The night before rained a little and in the morning roads were frozen slightly but I wasn’t aware of them. When I went to work, I cross the street a crosswalk with my backpack and I suddenly slipped and fell on my backside. I jumped to my feet and walked again on my way. I was ashamed that in rush hour many drivers saw my sliding. Since that accident, I go to work wearing sneakers. It’s comfortable and safe. |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-04-12 |
첨삭 내용 | Great job, Rose. I'm glad you were not hurt in the fall :) Memorable weather events usually happen in winter. |