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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-04-11
내용 A memorable event that was associated with weather usually happen in winter.
In winter, a lot of snow fell down and roads are slick.
Two years ago in winter happened accident.
The night before rained a little and in the morning roads were frozen slightly but I wasn’t aware of them.
When I went to work, I cross the street a crosswalk with my backpack and I suddenly slipped and fell on my backside.
I jumped to my feet and walked again on my way.
I was ashamed that in rush hour many drivers saw my sliding.
Since that accident, I go to work wearing sneakers.
It’s comfortable and safe.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-04-12
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Great job, Rose. I'm glad you were not hurt in the fall :)

Memorable weather events usually happen in winter.
In winter, lots of snow falls and roads are slick.
Two winters ago there was an accident.
The night before, it rained a little and the roads were frozen slightly, but I was unaware.
When I went to work, I crossed the street a crosswalk with my backpack, and I suddenly slipped and fell on my backside.
I jumped to my feet and continued on my way.
I was ashamed that in rush hour many drivers saw me fall.
Since that accident, I go to work wearing sneakers.
It’s comfortable and safe.

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