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제목 | My Neighbors | 등록일 | 2016-04-11 |
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내용 | I live in an apartment complex. In the morning, I often come across my neighbors who live next door in the elevator. The husband is a high school teacher and the wife is an office worker. My neighbors are quite sociable, so they say hello to me every time we come across. Last week, we talked about a new Chinese restaurant, and agreed that it was the best restaurant in our neighborhood. I'm thinking of going there next week and have a meal with them. It will be a good opportunity to get to know them better. They are also so generous. I like to listen music loudly in my place but they never interrupt me and complain for noisy. It is obvious that I have great neighbors so that I and my wife can not wait for having dinner with them. | ||
담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-04-12 |
첨삭 내용 | Great job! This was well written. I just made some small corrections. Please review the edited text below :) I live in an apartment complex. In the morning, I often come across my nextdoor neighbors in the elevator. The husband is a high school teacher, and the wife is an office worker. My neighbors are quite sociable, so they say hello to me every time we see each other. Last week, we talked about a new Chinese restaurant and agreed that it was the best restaurant in our neighborhood. I'm thinking of going there next week and having a meal with them. It will be a good opportunity to get to know them better. They are also very generous. I like to listen music loudly in my place, but they never interrupt me, or complain about the noise. It is obvious that I have great neighbors, so my wife and I cannot wait to have dinner with them. |