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제목 Pet 등록일 2016-04-12
내용 I own a puppy named Mong. He is a 5-year-old china Shih Tzu.

When I first saw him at a pet store, I immediately fell in love with him.

Mong has white fur with yellow spots on his body which makes him even cuter.

Whenever I gently pat him belly, he feels better.

I feed him twice a day, and wash him once a month.

Raising a pet requires a great deal of care and a big responsibility.

However, I don’t feel tired when I give Mong a bath or when I brush his teeth,

because he’s a part of myfamily.
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2016-04-14
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I own a puppy named Mong. He is a 5-year-old Chinese Shih Tzu.

When I first saw him at a pet store, I immediately fell in love with him.

Mong has white fur with yellow spots on his body which makes him even cuter.

Whenever I gently pat his belly, he feels better.

I feed him twice a day, and wash him once a month.

Raising a pet requires a great deal of care and  responsibility.

However, I don’t feel tired when I give Mong a bath or when I brush his teeth,

because he’s a part of myfamily.

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