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제목 | Pet | 등록일 | 2016-04-12 |
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내용 | I own a puppy named Mong. He is a 5-year-old china Shih Tzu. When I first saw him at a pet store, I immediately fell in love with him. Mong has white fur with yellow spots on his body which makes him even cuter. Whenever I gently pat him belly, he feels better. I feed him twice a day, and wash him once a month. Raising a pet requires a great deal of care and a big responsibility. However, I don’t feel tired when I give Mong a bath or when I brush his teeth, because he’s a part of myfamily. |
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담당강사 | Danielle2 | 등록일 | 2016-04-14 |
첨삭 내용 | I own a puppy named Mong. He is a 5-year-old Chinese Shih Tzu. |