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제목 My Favorite Food 등록일 2016-04-20
내용 My favorite food is sandwich. I like it because it is easy to make and convenient to eat. When I was a university student, I used to have sandwich for lunch almost every day. These days, however, I eat cheese sandwich once or twice a week. Another reason I like sandwich is because making sandwich is very creative work. I put various ingredients on the bread using my imagination. I can use anythings edible from well-known ingrediants such as cheese, tomato, lettuce and sliced ham to untraditional ingredients such as kimchi, nudles and even chocolate. It is small inovation in my daily routine to make new sandwich with unique food. For these reasons I really like to enjoy sandwich. Just the thought of it makes my mouth water.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-04-20
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Great job, David. I love sandwiches, too :)

My favorite food is a sandwich. I like it because it is easy to make and convenient to eat. When I was a university student, I used to have a sandwich for lunch almost every day. These days, however, I eat cheese sandwiches once or twice a week. Another reason I like sandwiches, is because making a sandwich is very creative work. I put various ingredients on the bread using my imagination. I can use anything edible from well-known ingredients, such as cheese, tomato, lettuce and sliced ham, to untraditional ingredients, such as kimchi, noodles, and even chocolate. It is a small inovation in my daily routine to make a new sandwich with unique food. For these reasons I really like to enjoy sandwiches. Just the thought of it makes my mouth water.

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