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제목 | help,please | 등록일 | 2016-05-06 |
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내용 | Many people go to the movies on weekends or holidays. There are lots of movie theaters around Taegu. In the theater, several kinds of movies are showed, it's easy to select what you want to see the movie on the spot. These days I haven't seen impolite person who acts strange at public places like theater. You can often see some people shouting or disposing of trash illeagally in the park. But the publis order of Korea is gradually getting better. |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-05-09 |
첨삭 내용 | Great job, Rose. Please review the edited text below :) Many people go to the movies on weekends or holidays. |