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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-09
내용 I’d like tell you about place and house where I live.
Around my house is three middle and high schools and they are so-called good schools.
The price of apartment is much higher than other district.
My house is not expensive beause it is a 2-story house not an apartment. It’s been a long time since the house was built.
I live on the first floor with my housband and two kids.
There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms and small livingroom.
The bedrooms are wide and the livingroom is narrow but I like spending this space because of family’s shared place.
My parents in-low live on the second floor.
I also have a studio apartment in Andong city because of job.
My house is located the slanted slpoes and it’s not easy to get to there by walking but a hill is behind the house and air is fresh.
If you live around here, you may enjoy your life.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-10
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Great job, Rose. Both places sound very nice :)

I’d like tell you about my house and neighborhood.
Around my house are three middle and high schools, and they are so-called good schools.
The price of the apartment is much higher than other districts.
My house is not expensive, beause it is a 2-story house, not an apartment. It’s been a long time since the house was built.
I live on the first floor with my housband and two kids.
There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms and a small livingroom.
The bedrooms are wide, and the livingroom is narrow, but I like spending time in this space because it's my family’s shared place.
My in-laws live on the second floor.
I also have a studio apartment in Andong city because of my job.
My house is located on the slanted slopes, and it’s not easy to get to there by walking, but a hill is behind the house and the air is fresh.
If you live around here, you may enjoy your life.

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