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제목 Reading the newspaper 3 등록일 2016-05-09
내용 Let me tell you about the last article in the newspapers was new smart phone. The brand is so populer in over the would. It is Glalexy S7. Maybe you know that. The comany is really big about smart phone. I read the article that the comany announced new model, on my smart phone application a month ago. I was suprized and presered since I was waiting new model for two years. I looking forword next model. New model has a lot of state-of-the-art function such as dual fixcel camera, supper protect water, long time bettery ability and so on. I can take ficture on day and night by using dual fixcel camera. Also I think the looks was pretty good. I expect the cost will be able to get it. I can't wait to have it in my hand so soon.
담당강사 Sheryl 등록일 2016-05-09
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Let me tell you about the last article I read in the newspapers. It was about a new smart phone. The brand is so popular all over the world. It is Galaxy S7. Maybe you know that. Our company is really big in producing smart phones. I read the article that the company announced a new model on my smart phone application a month ago. I was surprised and pressured since I was waiting for the new model for two years. I'm looking forword to the next model. The new model has a lot of state-of-the-art functions such as dual pixel camera, supper protect water, long time bettery ability and so on. I can take pictures on day and night by using dual pixel camera. Also, I think the look was pretty good. I expect the cost will be affordable to get it. I can't wait to have it in my hand so soon.

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