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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-10
내용 The household chores are continuous and repeated
I don’t like doing housework from childhood.
I have marreid for twenty years but I'm not accustomed to doing housewife’s working.
In Taegu, I always prepare my family’s meal and wash the dishes and my housband cleans up the house, mostly vacuuming, doing laundry and throwing up the trash.
I’m happy that my housband helps me to do domestic chores very well
In Andong, I have to do housework by myself so I am stressful
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-11
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Great job, Rose! Review the edited text below :)

The household chores are continuous and repetitious.
I haven't liked doing housework since childhood.
I have been marreid for twenty years, but I'm not accustomed to doing housewife’s work.
In Taegu, I always prepare my family’s meal and wash the dishes, and my housband cleans up the house by mostly vacuuming, doing laundry and taking out the trash.
I’m happy that my husband helps me do domestic chores very well
In Andong, I have to do housework by myself, so I am stressed.

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