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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-11
내용 You know that my house was built thirty years ago.
Just before we moved this house, we had to put up new wallpaper, replace outlet and sink.
One of these days, a jujube tree in a front yard was slanted dangerously.
I didn’t know why this happened.
When flowers bloom, my house is bright and pretty.
It may be lack of fertilizer or die of natural causes.
My husband was obliged to cut the tree but we didn’t have a suitable tool so he suffered from cutting the tree.
We didn’t remove roots of the tree yet.
Someday, we have to work finishing touches
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-12
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Good job, Rose :)

You know that my house was built thirty years ago.
Just before we moved to this house, we had to put up new wallpaper, replace outlets, and a sink.
One of these days, a jujube tree in the front yard was slanted dangerously.
I didn’t know why this happened.
When flowers bloom, my house is bright and pretty.
It may be a lack of fertilizer, or it could have died of natural causes.
My husband was obliged to cut down the tree, but we didn’t have a suitable tool, so he had a hard time.
We didn’t remove the roots of the tree yet.
Someday, we have to work on the finishing touches

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