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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-12
내용 In the past, I didn’t like to take a walk.
These days, I try to talk a walk if I have a little time for my health’s improvement.
I don’t have special clothes to walk.
I usually wear a long-sleeved shirts, comfortable pants and sneakers.
If the wind blows or the weather is cold, I put on the jumper.
I don’t like to apply makeup or sunblock and I surly put on a broad brimmed hat.
Presently, it’s not easy to have time doing exercise.
When I go to work, I usually walk wearing suit with my bag and sneakers.
It helps me to improve health and give energy
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-13
첨삭 내용

Great job, Rose. I like to go for walks, too :)

In the past, I didn’t like to take a walk.
These days, I try to take a walk for my health if I have a little time.
I don’t have special clothes for walking.
I usually wear a long-sleeved shirts, comfortable pants, and sneakers.
If the wind blows, or the weather is cold, I put on a jumper.
I don’t like to apply makeup or sunblock. I prefer to wear a broad-brimmed hat.
Presently, it’s not easy to have time for exercise.
When I go to work, I bring sneakers in my bag and walk in my business suit.
Walking helps to improve my health and give me energy.

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