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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-17
내용 As I am a civil servant, I always wear suit so it’s easy to choose clothes.
In the past, I enjoyed wearing bright colors such as red, pink and blue. But now I usually buy clothes with black, grey and white.
I am not a fashionista and I don’t know newest fashion trend so much.
For three to four years, skinny pants are very popular.
Many women are wearing skinny pants.
These are comfortable to be active and let people look charming.
But these days, skinny pants are changing bootcut or wide pants.
These pants were in fashion tewnty years ago.
Many people say that trend goes around comes around.
I agree with the proverb completely.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-18
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Great job, Rose! Review the edits below :)

I am a civil servant, so I always wear a suit. It’s easy to choose clothes. for work.
In the past, I enjoyed wearing bright colors such as red, pink and blue, but now I usually buy clothes with black, grey and white.
I am not a fashionista, and I don’t know much about the newest fashion trends.
For three to four years, skinny pants were very popular.
Many women were wearing skinny pants.
These are comfortable to be active in and make people look nice.
These days, skinny pants are changing to bootcut or wide pants.
These pants were in fashion tewnty years ago.
Many people say that trends come and go.
I agree with the proverb completely.

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