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제목 My Neighborhood 등록일 2016-05-17
내용 Let me tell you about my Neighborhood.

I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.

My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.

There are two restaurants a couple of bank and a big mall.

So I often go there with my family during the weekend.

I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.

I think it makes my life more convenient.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2016-05-17
첨삭 내용

Let me tell you about my Neighborhood.

I live in an apartment in Dunchon-Dong.

My neighborhood is very calm and peaceful.

There are two restaurants and a couple of banks and a big mall.

So I often go there with my family during the weekend.

I don't have to worry about safety and noise problem at all.

I think it makes my life more convenient.

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