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제목 Teacher Cen, I hope that you feel better soon~! 등록일 2016-05-24
내용 Dear, Cen

I was happy to join this class tonight.
But you have a cold, it's worrying.
I want you to be better a cold.

By the way, I have something to impart to you.
When I heard audio recordings again, I could know more.
Because your voice sounds more loud and clear.
In the recording, My voice sounds is small,too.
You also couldn't hear my voice nevertheless you catched on that.
In addtion you gave praise. I appreciate it.
I hope you'll always be healthy.
God bless you. Goodnight~!
담당강사 Cen2 등록일 2016-05-25
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CORRECTION:

Dear Cen,

I was happy to join this class tonight. But, you have a cold and it's worrying. I want you to be better.

By the way, I have something to impart to you. When I heard
the audio recordings again, I could know more. Because your voice sounds louder and clear. In the recording, my voice sounds small too. You also couldn't hear my voice nevertheless, you understood meIn addtion, you gave praise. I appreciate it.

I hope you'll always be healthy.

God bless you.

Goodnight~!

REPLY:

Hi, Sugyeong! Thank you for sending this message. I appreciate it so much.

Thank you too for your onsideration of my condition now. You encourage me. I hope too  that my cough will be gone soonest. It's kinda difficulty for me especially when I sleep at night.

As for our class, I can always here you clearly. I guess it's the line that makes you not hear me well. Good that we have audio recordings. I will speak louder and clearer next time so that you cxan fully comprehend me.

You deserve the positive comments I gave you for you do so well in class. You are sincere and earnest to learn English. Quite a good student you are! ~~ And, I'm proud of you.

Take care and God bless you too in Jesus Christ's name!

 

your teacher,

Cen

 

 

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