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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-25
내용 Hello! Yaeran. This is youngsook speaking.
I am happy to hear your voice after a long time.
How have you been? I am going to visit Seattle next month?
I don’t know about Seattle exceptthe movie “Sleepless in Seattle” starring Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan.
So I'd like to know about that place. If you have time, please answer the questions.
First, Does Seattle often rain and people feel much more gloomy than other cities?
Second, I heared that Seattle is near to Canada and many Canadian come and go to Seattle for shopping and playing.
If I visit Seattle, is I possible for me to tour to Canada.
Lastly, I know that Seattle is famous for Starbucks’s head office. I love coffee so I want to buy good tasty coffee. Can you recommand a shop or store to buy coffee?

If I arrive Seattle as soon as possible, I’ll contact with you.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-26
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Great job, Rose. Review the edits below :)

Hello!,Yaeran! This is Youngsook speaking.
I am happy to hear your voice. It's been a long time.
How have you been? I am going to visit Seattle next month.
I don’t know about Seattle, exceptt he movie “Sleepless in Seattle,” starring Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan.
I'd like to know about that place. If you have time, please answer these questions.
First, does it often rain, and do people feel much more gloomy than in other cities?
Second, I heard that Seattle is near Canada, and many Canadians come to Seattle for shopping and playing.
If I visit Seattle, is it possible for me to tour Canada as well?
Lastly, I know that Seattle is famous for Starbucks' head office. I love coffee, so I want to buy good tasting coffee. Can you recommand a shop or store to buy coffee?

I’ll contact you, as soon as I arrive in Seattle.

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