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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-05-26
내용 Hello! Is this Sunflower clinic? This is Youngsook speaking.
I’d like to make an appointment with Dr. Lee.
I already received treatment there several times and there were medical records.
Can I possibly see Dr. Lee on this Friday?
4 p.m is good for me.
You mean that Dr. Lee has an appointment with another patient. Oh, I see.
How about 2 p.m after lunch? Okay, I’ll see you then. Thank you.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-05-27
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Very good, Rose. Just a coupe of small edits :)

Hello! Is this the Sunflower Clinic? This is Youngsook speaking.
I’d like to make an appointment with Dr. Lee.
I already received treatment there several times, so there should be medical records.
Can I possibly see Dr. Lee this Friday?
4 p.m is good for me.
You mean that Dr. Lee has an appointment with another patient. Oh, I see.
How about 2 p.m, after lunch? Okay, I’ll see you then. Thank you.

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