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제목 help me, please! 등록일 2016-05-31
내용 I think that the housing market in Korea is mad in thease days.
Even for those work hard, it's not easy to buy house. The house prices are getting higher and
If you wake up in the morning, you could be surptised at the news.
One of my collegues bought an apartment with a morgage from bank near my house two years ago and
she sold it 150 thousand dollars at a profit recently.
The general workers like me hardly save amount of money in their lives so they lose their heart whenever they hear those kinds of news. If you speculate real estate and ypu have a good fortune, you could make much money than hard-working people. That's sad reality.
Taegu is the greatest increase housing prices throughout the country.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-01
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Very good, Rose. Review the edits below :)

I think that the housing market in Korea is bad thease days.
Even for those who work hard, it's not easy to buy a house. The house prices are getting higher and higher.
If you wake up in the morning, you could be surprised at the news.
One of my collegues bought an apartment with a morgage from the bank near my house two years ago, and she sold it for $150K profit.
General workers like me hardly save a lot of money in their lives, so they lose heart whenever they hear that kind of news. If you speculate on real estate, and you have good fortune, you could make more money than hard-working people. That's the sad reality.
Taegu is the greatest increase housing prices throughout the country.

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