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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-01
내용 These days, maybe for five years, the banks are lower interest rates.
Many people loan money from bank and buy real estates like apartment, land and they rent homeless people with high interest rates.
The homeless people get a mortgage excessively beyond their ability to pay debt.
The present apartment’s price is skyrocketing more than five years ago and even some apartment’s price is raised two times.
Although you have a house, you have to repay principal and interest so you don’t hardly use money for living. It's called those kinds of people “house poor”
Experts say that the bank rates are rising in near future.
The people who bought houses with mortgage may be dangerous their domestic economy.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-02
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Great job, Rose.

These days, or maybe for the last five years, the banks have had lower interest rates.
Many people borrow money from banks and buy real estate like apartmenst, and land, and they rent homes to people with high interest rates.
People get mortgages excessively beyond their ability to pay.
Presently, apartment prices are skyrocketing compared to five years ago and even some apartment prices have doubled.
Although you have a house, you have to repay principal and interest, so you hardly use money for living. Those people are called “house poor."
Experts say that the bank rates will be rising in the near future.
People who bought houses with mortgages may be in a dangerous, domestic economic situation.

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