Hello again Jayden!

Thank you so much for your compliment about being one of the best teachers you have had! Your words are very kind! 
Ill correct what you've written here and we can continue our lessons during the next class time! 
Thank you for being such a kind student. 

Hi. Kayla

I was really happy that I looked your feedback message.
I feel that you are one of the best teacher I have met. [Here you forgot to make the word Teacher plural which means to associate it with more than one teacher, so you would just add an "S" so make it "Teachers" which would look like this: "the best teachers"]
I haven't met a teacher who make a specific feedback like you. 
I am really appreciate you. [Instead of saying "I am really appreciate" you would just say "I really appreciate" because the "I" accounts for how you feel]

So, today's breaking news topic is about china compnany's advertisement. ["About china company's advertisement" here you would just add  the word "A" between China and Company and you would change "China" to "Chinese" meaning that the company is "chinese" making it "About a chinese company's advertisement"]

The laundry detergent company of china made a racist advertisement. [ Instead of "The" you would use the word "A" so "A Laundry detergent company"]
A chinese woman put detergent into the mouth of a black man. 
And she push him into washing machin, so he change to chinese man with wite white skin. ["So he change to" you would use the word "into" so it would look like "So he would change into a chinese man with white skin.]
So in the internet, there are a lot of a critic written. [Instead of saying "In" the internet we would say "On the internet"]
These days, even if the racism is very sensitive problem over the world, [Here you would just say "Racism is a very sensitive problem" and use the word "through out" instead of "over" so all together it would look like this: "Racism is a very sensitve problem throughout the world."]
I am concerned about such behavior.
Finally, I make effort to correct "ph"sound. 

Thank you.
Have a nice day!

Jayden

Youve done very well here Jayden! Please continue to study so hard!