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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-02
내용 After I’ve got married, our family have rent a house for a long time. Five years ago, we finally bought our house.
At that time, we didn’t make much money.
So we had to buy old house and lots of things were done to repair or change.
Before we moved the house, the house was repaired.
First, we changed every outlet, lights, showerheads into new ones and the bathtub was taken away
Second, we put up wallpapers all rooms.
Third, at second floor, we constructed to separate living room from one room.
All of things were done by hired workers.
We spent a lot of money but the house is a place to live in.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-03
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Great job, Rose :)

After I got married, our family rented a house for a long time. Five years ago, we finally bought our house.
At that time, we didn’t make much money.
So we had to buy an old house and lots of things were done to repair or change it.
Before we moved to the house, it was repaired.
First, we changed every outlet, light, and showerhead, and the bathtub was taken away
Second, we put up wallpaper in every room.
Third, on second floor, we constructed a wall to separate the living room from another room.
All of the things were done by hired workers.
We spent a lot of money but the house is now a home.

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