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제목 | Simple sentences | 등록일 | 2016-06-03 |
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내용 | #1 - wedding ceremony I cannot go to the wedding ceremony because I had plans with my friends. So I will ask my friend to pass the money to the groom as a wedding gift on behalf of me. #2 - sprain I sprained my back a few months ago. Although my back was nearly recovered, I'm still reluctant to play basketball. #3 - visit to China I'm planning to go to China this summer with my girlfriend. We have been together for more than 3 and a half years, but it will be my first visit to China. I'm looking forward to seeing her family and her hometown. #4 - tragic accident There was a tragic accident happened in Korea a few days ago. A person was attempting to commit suicide and jumped from the 21st floor of a building, but unfortunately he fell on a passerby and they were both dead at the same time. |
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담당강사 | Morgan1 | 등록일 | 2016-06-07 |
첨삭 내용 | Fantastic job, Cho! Here are my (very small) corrections: #1 - wedding ceremony Great use of future tense (I will ask my friend)! I change "I had plans" to "I have plans" because the plans are still in place so you should use the present tense in this case. The recovery process for injuries is ongoing so we typically use the present tense to discuss the current state of an injury. Perfect! Excellent grammar! (Or: "A tragic accident happened in Korea a few days ago." If you use "there was" you need "that" between "accident and "happened" because "was" is the verb, but if you remove "there was" then "happened" becomes the verb.) You used perfect grammar! That is an Incredibly sad story. |