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제목 My Favorite Food 등록일 2016-06-07
내용 My favorite food is ramen(라면).
I like it because It is easy to make and simple to cook. so I often cook ramen.
First, I take out a pot, pour water and heat it for 3 minutes until it boils.
Second, I put all the ingredients including the noodles,
soup mix and dried vegetables to the boiling water.
Third, I stir it for 3 minutes with chopsticks.
when I open the lid, the ramen look OK. so I taste it,it is good.
I will give you a tip. If you want a special taste, add eggs and Kimchi.
It will be more delicious.
I think, ramen is really the best dish ever.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2016-06-07
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My favorite food is ramen(라면).
I like it because it is easy to make and simple to cook. So I often cook ramen.
First, I take out a pot, pour water and heat it for 3 minutes until it boils.
Second, I put all the ingredients including the noodles,
soup mix and dried vegetables to the boiling water.
Third, I stir it for 3 minutes with chopsticks.
When I open the lid, the ramen looks OK. So I taste it and it is good.
I will give you a tip. If you want a special taste, add eggs and Kimchi.
It will be more delicious.
I think, ramen is really the best dish ever.

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