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제목 Watching a Movie 등록일 2016-06-08
내용 MY favorite movie is The Lord of the Rings.
The Lord of the Rings is typical Hollywood blockbuster movie.
I am a fan of all the movie peter Jackson.
peter Jackson's kingkong is like another movie.
The best scene from the Lord of the Rings was many ememies and fight a war scene.
The Lord of the Rings is computer geurepik and the scale are overwelming crowed.
But the sequel The Hobbit An unexpected the Jourmey is not successful.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2016-06-08
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MY favorite movie is The Lord of the Rings.
The Lord of the Rings is a typical Hollywood blockbuster movie.
I am a fan of all the movies of Peter Jackson.
Peter Jackson's King Kong is like another movie.
The best scene from the Lord of the Rings was many enemies fighting in a war scene.
The Lord of the Rings is computer generic on a scale of an overwelming crowd.
But the sequel, The Hobbit An Unexpected Journey, is not successful.

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