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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-10
내용 I am using Samsung Galaxy S4 smartphone. A new product was released two and half years ago and I bought it.
The information search speed of the machine is fast and we can save time.
I am not interested in dealing with gadget, but I make use of a smartphone because it is a miniature of computer.
First, I always get the new informaton from my own smartphone. When I am wondering something, I can look for it on prompt.
Second, it’s good for me to listen English conversation or music through YouTube.
Third, it’s equipped with high-resolution camera, so if you want to take a picture, you could do it.
Nowadays, my colleagues make use of the map app.
The map app is upgraded every time. If you drive a car, you could find the street or destination.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-13
첨삭 내용

Great job, Rose :)

I am using a Samsung Galaxy S4 smartphone. It was released two and half years ago, and I bought it.
The information search speed of the machine is fast, and we can save time.
I am not interested in dealing with gadgets, but I make use of a smartphone, because it is a miniature computer.
First, I always get new informaton from my smartphone. When I am wondering about something, I can promptly find an answer.
Second, it’s good for me to listen to English conversations or music through YouTube.
Third, it’s equipped with a high-resolution camera, so if you want to take a picture, you can do it.
Nowadays, my colleagues make use of the map app.
The map app is upgraded every time. If you drive a car, you can find the street or destination.

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