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제목 Receiving Package 등록일 2016-06-11
내용 I ordered my shirts and pants online shopping mall yesterday.

I just arrive at home,the doorbell rings. I opens the door and
find a deliveryman standing with a package in his hands.

He hands the box over to me and asks me to sign a form

I receive the package and sign. I unpack the box and get checked my shirts and pants.

My pants is too small, I'll get an exchange larger one tomorrow.
담당강사 Stacey 등록일 2016-06-13
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I ordered my shirts and pants  through online shopping yesterday.

I just arrived home, the doorbell rang. I opened the door and
the deliveryman was standing with a package on his hands.

He handed the box to me and asked me to sign a form.

I received the package and signed. I unpacked the box and checked my shirts and pants.

My pants was too small, I'll get an exchange with a larger size tomorrow.

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