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제목 My daughter's sick 등록일 2016-06-14
내용 Last weekend, My family planed to go to the resort one night two days.

There are a swimming pool, a shopping mall and a historical spots near the resort.

In the morning, I prepared for some clothes, swimsuits.

My daughter told me, "I was sick". I ignored her word for the first time.

But, she said, "I had a stomachache" several times.

I drove doctor's office. Doctor examined my daughter. He said she had a enteritis.

I gave up going to resort. I didn't confirm my daughter's sick.

I was so sorry my daughter.

She has stayed slack.
담당강사 Stacey 등록일 2016-07-20
첨삭 내용

Last weekend, My family planned to go to a resort, it was 2 days/one night.

There are swimming pools, a shopping mall and historical spots near the resort.

In the morning, I prepared our clothes and swimsuits/swimwear.

My daughter told me, "I am sick". I ignored her for the first time.

But, she said, "I had a stomachache" several times.

I drove her to the doctor's office. Doctor examined my daughter. He said she has an enteritis.

I gave up going to the resort. I was not sure about my my daughter's illness.

I was so sorry for my daughter.

She has to stay slack.

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