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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-14
내용 I enrolled Facebook 2years ago and treid to act in virtual space.
In my opinion, SNS is used private spaces or is advertised company’s products.
These days, politicians make the most use of SNS.
SNS has two-sides, good and bad points.
I sometimes learn many things and know strange people from SNS.
But some people use SNS badly and they supply wrong information.
My boss makes use of Facebook very well. He always uproads on it various kinds of talking.
Even if I am not with him, I can know what he is doing through Facebook.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-15
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Great job, Rose!

I joined Facebook 2 years ago.
In my opinion, SNS use private spaces to advertise.
These days, politicians make the most use of SNS.
SNS have good and bad points.
I sometimes learn many things and know strange people from SNS.
But some people use SNS badly, and they supply false information.
My boss makes use of Facebook very well. He always posts various kinds of statuses.
Even if I am not with him, I know what he is doing through Facebook.

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