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제목 going to park 등록일 2016-06-20
내용 MY favorite Park is Olympic park
I live in Dunchon-Dong area.
My place is close to Olympic park.
When the weather is good. I go to the park with my family.
I go to park on foot take 20 minutes.
The park is very clean & beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in the park.
Olympic park is very huge. It have many stadium and picnic areas for family.
Also delicious restaurant & wandering course.
People take a walk or ride a bike along the lake.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2016-06-20
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MY favorite Park is Olympic park
I live in Dunchon-Dong area.
My place is close to Olympic park.
When the weather is good, I go to the park with my family.
I go to park on foot and it takes 20 minutes.
The park is very clean & beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in the park.
Olympic park is very huge. It has many stadiums and picnic areas for families.
Also, it has delicious restaurants & wandering course.
People take a walk or ride their bikes along the lake.

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