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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-21
내용 I think that I know lots of English words. But it’s hard to use them. When I speak to you, I don’t recall proper words.
I always think Korean and then translate English, so language arrangement is not smooth.
In my opinion, learning foreign language is hard and painful.
Some expert says if you learn foreign language from an early age, you can speak it well.
In Korea, many parents think that speaking well foreign language of their kids gets ahead in competitive society.
Let their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency.
That’s also serious social problem.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-22
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Good job, Rose :)

I think that I know lots of English words, but it’s hard to use them. When I speak to you, I don’t recall proper words.
I always think in Korean and then translate to English, so the arrangement is not smooth.
In my opinion, learning a foreign language is hard and painful.
Some experts say if you learn a foreign language from an early age, you can speak it well.
In Korea, many parents think that if their kids speak a foreign language well, it will help them get ahead in our competitive society.

Let their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency. (I'm not sure about this sentence)
That’s also serious social problem.

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