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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-22
내용 I think that the most influenced foreign country to our culture is China.
Korea has connected China for a long time, approximately over 1,000 years.
If you read the newspaper, you can easily see the Chinese character and understand the meaning with it.
Most of our first name are borrowed from China.
But nowadays, Korean culture is influencing other countries because of Korean Wave.
It started with drama, K-pop, fashion and continues Korean food.
I was surprised at the news that K-pop was so popular in Asia like Japan, China, Hongkong and Vietnam.
The young people in those country were crazy about idol group’s performance.
Through these international exchanges, our culture is known abroad.

Parents have their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-23
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Good job, Rose :)

I think that China has more  influence on Korean culture than any other country.
Korea has connected with China for a long time, approximately over 1,000 years.
If you read the newspaper, you can easily see Chinese characters and understand the meaning.
Most of our first names are borrowed from China.
But nowadays, Korean culture is influencing other countries, because of Korean Wave.
It started with drama, K-pop, fashion and continues with Korean food.
I was surprised at the news that K-pop was so popular in other Asian countries like Japan, China, Hongkong and Vietnam.
The young people in those country are crazy about idol groups.
Through these international exchanges, our culture is known abroad.

Parents have their kids teach foreign language without reference to kids’tendency.

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