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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-24
내용 Hello, boss. I’m planning to take a flight bound for Dubai and I just arrived at the airport to catch the plane.
But at the counter says that the strong wind os blowing and the flight can’t take off on time.
If I get on a plane after wind is calming down, I ought to be late the important meeting with our client in Dubai and we have to look for our ways.
First, if our client doesn’t have special schedule the next day, we’ll reschedule the meeting or we’ll delay the other day.
Second, if the situation is not quite favorable, why don’t we hold a meeting via videoconference?
This decision is up to you. Bye.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-06-27
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Excellent job, Rose!

Hello, boss. I’m planning to take a flight bound for Dubai, and I just arrived at the airport to catch the plane.
But person at the counter says that a strong wind is blowing, and the flight can’t take off on time.
If I get on the plane after the wind calms down, I will be late for my important meeting with our client in Dubai.
First, if our client is available the next day, we’ll reschedule the meeting.
Second, if the situation is not quite favorable, why don’t we hold a meeting via video conference?
This decision is up to you. Bye.

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